https://youtu.be/D8A0Uk2r53A
I learned that with these things I need to get to a the point quicker and in a more concise ways with emphasis on the overall plan rather than the hook. That is what I did this time. I should just stop changing it so much.
Hi Hassan,
ReplyDeleteI think the organization and purpose of your pitch is much clearer now than your previous pitches. I had a difficult time too getting the point at first because I was so focused on my hook. I liked how you used your hand gestures to emphasize certain points when discussing them. Great job.
Hassan,
ReplyDeleteI think the overall most important thing in a presentation is being able to be comfortable and show that you are confident in whatever it is that you are presenting. I think the way you used your hands definitely demonstrates that confidence in yourself and your idea. Try not to get too caught up on one part like the hook because if you get the customers to believe in your idea and yourself the hook wont be remembered as much.